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Generic Text Corrections (Part 2)

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Description

The old thread was getting a bit messy, so I'm transferring all the still-open issues from it to this one, along with a pile of new ones.

## From #6465:

- [X] Scorching Lava: the kicker isn't being required to get the kicker effect
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84729986-a1853300-af5a-11ea-8d3e-e002472a0d15.png)

- [x] Life Matrix: it refers to removing a counter from (and regenerating) the wrong permanent
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84730182-19ebf400-af5b-11ea-81e2-1a6abfe94d44.png)

- [x] Aven Trailblazer: type > types
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/83060255-c6a01900-a020-11ea-9cf1-b9aae72d2ab7.png)

- [x] Dragon Grip: missing ferocious text
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/83060542-3adabc80-a021-11ea-94b5-53419d0dca99.png)

- [x] Woebringer Demon: missing "player's"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/83060851-b472aa80-a021-11ea-8795-e2bd9de25bd2.png)

- [ ] When picking between piles, it would be nice if the chat confirmation was the same punctuation/spacing as the choice - i.e. make these the same:
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/82282026-78bc4e80-9958-11ea-9d32-c3a9c7e18f7d.png)
**Grammar-wise, that wouldn't work either.**

- [x] Some modal cards use capitals in the on-the-stack hover text, while some don't. Looks like it's all the CCC Commands that are in lowercase.
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/82266690-fae44d00-992f-11ea-9dcf-955f5a0a5d8f.png)
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/82266705-0899d280-9930-11ea-81e8-e59ba07c9be9.png)

- [x] Retaliation has a bad substitution going on in its granted ability
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/80155647-c1fec580-8587-11ea-9398-75ac5d0d911c.png)

- [x] Magma Sliver's ability is confused
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/80155679-d642c280-8587-11ea-8aaa-d665b3d01250.png)

- [ ] Shredded Sails' text when cast doesn't format the bullets properly
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/80156685-2589f280-858a-11ea-8199-f870d42f5c8b.png)
**JayDi will have to look at this one.**

- [x] Hedron Blade: Equipped creature > it
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/80271362-26537f00-8685-11ea-9db4-5f913c3dd084.png)

- [x] Necromantic Summons: has two extra "s
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/80272025-92d17c80-868b-11ea-883f-8b4790d4a744.png)

- [ ] Sunbringer's Touch: reminder text in the wrong place
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/80298366-0d180480-8751-11ea-86ac-5b36fa6a1f6f.png)

- [x] Break Open: Face-down > face-down
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/80314014-459cfa00-87b4-11ea-9d57-42b4e5440d45.png)

- [x] capital offense: Target > target
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/80314047-7bda7980-87b4-11ea-95a0-d74f428516a6.png)
**This looks like a mistake on the card itself.**
*It's intentional on the card; the joke being that the entire card is in lower case.*

## New:

**Cards misusing "x for each" and/or not using "equal to"**

- [ ] Aerie Ouphes
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84832939-cbd6ff00-aff3-11ea-9708-2fcc001d235b.png)

- [ ] Anathemancer
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833213-65061580-aff4-11ea-9d1a-ed3dbf3fcbb5.png)

- [x] Angel of Renewal
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833258-849d3e00-aff4-11ea-91b5-d865272f0eb8.png)

- [x] Benediction of Moons
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833301-a4ccfd00-aff4-11ea-8d45-c4e1220a1231.png)

- [ ] Blazing Effigy
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833378-c8904300-aff4-11ea-84c3-927bf69632d6.png)

- [ ] Cinder Shade
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833405-d776f580-aff4-11ea-8b54-d7f2186b8cbb.png)

- [x] Dwarven Priest
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833536-1c9b2780-aff5-11ea-8475-fdf4f1c060bc.png)

- [ ] Dying Wish
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833569-3472ab80-aff5-11ea-80aa-0b3bc68669d9.png)

- [ ] Enter the Infinite
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833594-40f70400-aff5-11ea-8ed2-db02567f58d1.png)

- [ ] Faith Healer - also needs "a" > "an"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833682-769bed00-aff5-11ea-9096-212ca14b99f2.png)

- [ ] Flame Elemental
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833735-97644280-aff5-11ea-88c1-549834961c67.png)

- [ ] Foundry Champion
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833754-a5b25e80-aff5-11ea-900c-6b197938492d.png)

- [ ] Freyalise Supplicant
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/88488859-f357aa80-cf55-11ea-93f0-ec4ddf21f4b8.png)

- [ ] Ghitu Fire-Eater
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833772-b367e400-aff5-11ea-858c-18b6bd0c8672.png)

- [ ] Gristleback
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833900-e7430980-aff5-11ea-889c-e02b732c75c7.png)

- [ ] Hateflayer
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833944-f629bc00-aff5-11ea-8d01-b73b92c0ef3f.png)

- [ ] Heartfire Immolator
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/88488928-74af3d00-cf56-11ea-9b3e-ead99439e5cb.png)

- [ ] Hellhole Flailer
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84833990-05106e80-aff6-11ea-820e-8bc02ac3599f.png)

- [ ] Jagged-Scar Archers
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834064-31c48600-aff6-11ea-8a02-ea1f7f02416c.png)

- [ ] Jarad, Golgari Lich Lord
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834130-4dc82780-aff6-11ea-91e2-3ddc768f954e.png)

- [ ] Keep Watch
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834154-59b3e980-aff6-11ea-8e6a-c91c74fe9a5d.png)

- [ ] Lich Lord of Unx
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834214-82d47a00-aff6-11ea-9e7e-c3ac4f5afbc9.png)

- [ ] Maga, Traitor to Mortals
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834248-9253c300-aff6-11ea-8318-2c7d87230330.png)

- [ ] Massive Raid
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834284-a3043900-aff6-11ea-8373-6c9ed1168622.png)

- [ ] Morbid Curiosity
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834324-bc0cea00-aff6-11ea-9da3-172482534b8c.png)

- [ ] Paradoxical Outcome
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834419-e9599800-aff6-11ea-806a-34c962fd368a.png)

- [ ] Prime Speaker Zegana
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834451-fbd3d180-aff6-11ea-9aab-2a3ba7fb9131.png)

- [ ] Respite
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834500-1d34bd80-aff7-11ea-87ff-2470503d7a1c.png)

- [ ] Sink into Takenuma
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834530-35a4d800-aff7-11ea-9aff-3b48177a0b0e.png)

- [ ] Skarrgan Skybreaker
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834556-45242100-aff7-11ea-8836-d9a467e70bd2.png)

- [ ] Steadfast Armasaur
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834621-71d83880-aff7-11ea-8438-3320354f97a0.png)

- [ ] Vicious Betrayal
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834676-9502e800-aff7-11ea-8a4f-e1b4879641b1.png)

- [ ] Viridian Joiner
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/88488812-66acec80-cf55-11ea-995f-6d79a407a431.png)

**Cards that target twice but shouldn't**

- [ ] Chorus of Might
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84835414-30e12380-aff9-11ea-856d-4757a910dc23.png)

- [ ] Mizzium Skin
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834801-d98e8380-aff7-11ea-8579-b6314786c6c4.png)

- [ ] Ray of Command
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834824-e4e1af00-aff7-11ea-83e6-64ebe2e746e5.png)

- [ ] Retreat to Hagra
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84835389-232b9e00-aff9-11ea-8b40-c7cc6ab4079e.png)

- [ ] Teleportal
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834851-f0cd7100-aff7-11ea-81e7-9d6b9ba365a2.png)

- [ ] Weapon Surge
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84834878-02167d80-aff8-11ea-8a1a-026e226589a5.png)

**Other Issues**

- [ ] Alpine Houndmaster - "Alpine Houndmaster" > "it"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/90321648-40a1b900-df11-11ea-8ab3-7ada0f289c1f.png)

- [ ] Benthic Explorers - "Untapped tapped" > "Untapped a tapped"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/85796275-45ab6e80-b6ff-11ea-9142-61d61375cfc4.png)

- [ ] Bog Down's text is still wrong - it now says "two a land" instead of "two lands"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/82157975-69e77600-984a-11ea-864d-9e065eb38914.png)

- [x] Choking Vines: "that target" > "each of those creatures"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84937300-22e6dd80-b0a1-11ea-9fd3-dd54969f65c5.png)

- [ ] Clot Sliver: add "All"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84924890-c5499580-b08e-11ea-95d6-f896a70f7d74.png)

- [x] Collective Restraint - Missing "among lands"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84835731-d5636580-aff9-11ea-8931-071016280939.png)

- [ ] Custodi Soulcaller - the return to battlefield part is out of order
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84835762-e9a76280-aff9-11ea-8ef2-92a0835c4e77.png)

- [ ] Discontinuity - "on" > "from" in the reminder text
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/90321702-c1f94b80-df11-11ea-9f76-1cbb16a95db0.png)

- [ ] Elspeth, Undaunted Hero - "on up to two target creature." > "on each of up to two target creatures."
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/85796698-fc0f5380-b6ff-11ea-9467-ea6e19c21991.png)

- [x] Endless Swarm - cards > card
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84835785-f75ce800-aff9-11ea-9c7b-0a8a2ec68859.png)

- [ ] Essence Bottle - a > an
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84835816-08a5f480-affa-11ea-8169-c72b3c507654.png)

- [ ] Fae of Wishes - "Discard card" > "Discard two cards"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/85211281-3302f500-b30d-11ea-8e07-df1feb622f9b.png)

- [ ] Gideon, Champion of Justice - a couple things. a > an, that's still > He's still, Gideon, Champion of Justice > him
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84835936-4f93ea00-affa-11ea-97cd-7a507f59d256.png)

- [ ] Greater Krayt Dragon - creature > creatures
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84835959-60446000-affa-11ea-8186-3896611232c7.png)

- [ ] Grim Tutor - "card and put" > "card, put"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/90321812-f15c8800-df12-11ea-8463-b0ed2406bba6.png)

- [x] Hold the Gates - the entire first sentence doesn't belong
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84835999-80741f00-affa-11ea-92a7-e4397e4db59c.png)

- [ ] Iceberg - "a ice" > "an ice"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/87102984-4d980200-c219-11ea-99f2-6c35ec3f5c3d.png)

- [ ] Ice Cauldron - "...if Ice Cauldron has between 0 and 0 charge counters." > "...if there are no charge counters on Ice Cauldron."
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/87169533-c0df5980-c295-11ea-8515-03db64bef4f8.png)

- [ ] Indomitable Creativity - card > cards
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84836032-9255c200-affa-11ea-8a2c-834a09b7f71b.png)

- [ ] Invigorate - the first sentence is somehow out of order
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84836061-a7caec00-affa-11ea-9965-098e7df6cea9.png)

- [ ] Lowland Oaf - extra period and space
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84836156-cc26c880-affa-11ea-85fa-64732adae333.png)

- [ ] Magma Sliver - missing a space
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/85184709-78182000-b256-11ea-9da0-3cf83f0476f7.png)

- [ ] Paragon of the Amesha has an extra period and space:
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/83060741-8ee5a100-a021-11ea-855e-ca2d1aa3c619.png)

- [ ] Phantasmal Sphere - should adopt the new wording for creating a token
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84836190-df399880-affa-11ea-8bdd-e4b5cc1a9ce1.png)

- [ ] Retaliation - missing an end quote
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/85184264-b6acdb00-b254-11ea-8567-cd1f08a5906a.png)

- [ ] Rotwidow Pack - missing an "a", and the period should be a comma
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84836249-fe382a80-affa-11ea-9f64-6cfbd5f5e262.png)

- [ ] Sickening Dreams says as an additional cost twice
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/81465292-aa7e2a00-918e-11ea-9f29-114b510d7e4e.png)

- [ ] Sigil of Distinction - missing the em-dash after equip, and the reminder text looks weird without a cost
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84836339-2e7fc900-affb-11ea-984c-18d9894b5682.png)

- [ ] Soul Separator - missing "Exile target creature card from your graveyard."
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/86257025-9e0ac200-bb7e-11ea-8203-2123950b8112.png)

- [ ] Tamiyo, the Moon Sage - a couple things wrong. "for the rest of the game" should be removed, "from anywhere" should be added, and the weird fragment at the end of the ability should be removed
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84836488-6be45680-affb-11ea-8aec-85833cb9cada.png)

- [x] Teferi's Curse - should be enchanted permanent instead of creature
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84836569-97ffd780-affb-11ea-90d9-cc16c5e40481.png)

- [ ] Teferi's Protection - the text in chat about preventing damage to a play is missing a space
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/85956458-a4fdbe80-b94b-11ea-844f-a23ec1ea5539.png)

- [ ] Thundermaw Hellkite - "creatures" > "creature"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/89448126-c0af6e00-d71c-11ea-80c1-d89e2f33d428.png)

- [ ] Torment of Hailfire: "they" > "that player", otherwise the grammar on "discards" doesn't work
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/81466150-e3b99880-9194-11ea-907a-8c8e731e75c7.png)

- [ ] Twilight Prophet: missing a space
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/80270546-a5918480-867e-11ea-83d5-bd35a7ae4146.png)

- [ ] Vampirism - Draw > draw
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84836610-b1a11f00-affb-11ea-8328-933c0b651ad4.png)

- [ ] Venser's Journal - cards > card
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84836627-bf56a480-affb-11ea-87db-e79ab4af2e36.png)

- [ ] Voodoo Doll - replace "is instance" with the actual trigger condition
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/84836687-d8f7ec00-affb-11ea-89bc-68df77cdd5a4.png)

- [ ] Warden of the Woods - "When" > "Whenever"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/90321973-3d5bfc80-df14-11ea-9f49-d20ce3c1b55a.png)

- [ ] Wildfire - "fourlands" > "four lands"
![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/59861365/89448171-d02eb700-d71c-11ea-80e6-9bbd074a0132.png)

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Research direction

Start by locating the card text entries for the unchecked cards listed in the issue and compare them with the supplied screenshots and corrections. The issue covers many unrelated cards and formatting cases; done would mean applying the applicable unchecked corrections and verifying the resulting text in the game.

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Assessment

Tech stack
java
Domain
content, game-dev
Issue type
Bug
Difficulty
5/5
Estimated time
Over a week
Activity status
Stale
Clarity
Needs clarification
Newbie friendliness
20/100

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