Update wording of Incorporation Emails - UI DESIGN

Update wording of Incorporation Email to correct typos and grammar as well as making the message of the email clearer.

You have successfully registered a business with BC Business Registry. You can do business in other provinces and territories in Canada.
Company Name: Numbered Benefit Company Incorporation Number: BC0878564 Date and Time of Filing: June 25, 2020 11:58 AM Pacific Time
As part of a provincial and federal partnership, BC Registries and Online Services, our New West Partners, and other Canadian jurisdictions have developed an agreement to share company information. The initiative will facilitate the updating of information to new or existing extra provincial registrations of your BC company with one or more of the partner jurisdictions. Select the jurisdictions you wish to be redirected from the list below. You may want to submit a name search, register extra provincially or update an existing extra provincial registration.
Our Partners: •Alberta •Manitoba •Quebec •Saskatchewan If your jurisdiction is not listed as one of BC's extraprovincial partners, you must contact the jurisdiction you wish to register in directly in order to submit a name request or complete an extraprovincial registration.
Business Registry BC Registries and Online Services 1 877 526-1526

The issue names no file, test, or entry point. Locate the incorporation email template containing the supplied message, then update and review the copy so the typos, grammar, and unclear wording are corrected.

Written by the indexing model from the issue text.