Dense paragraph about Premium Plan instances
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https://quantum.cloud.ibm.com/docs/en/guides/instances#premium-plan-instance
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The second sentence is particularly dense due to all the parentheticals:
An administrator can set a usage limit on a Premium Plan instance that applies for the plan's 28-day rolling usage window. If an instance has been marked as "limited" by your administrator (you will see a "Remaining" column in the usage area) and the instance exceeds its allocation (defined by your administrator), any active workload will continue running (including sessions) but pending workloads will remain in the queue until more time is available. If an instance is not limited and the instance exceeds its allocation, jobs run with that instance are likely to run at a lower priority and experience longer queue times.
This makes it hard to read, and probably results in a bad translation. Can the sentence be split up?
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Open the Premium Plan instance section at the linked guide and review the quoted paragraph in context. Split the dense sentence into clearer sentences while preserving the usage-limit, workload, and queueing behavior described. Done means the passage is easier to read and translate without changing its meaning.
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