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Description

Mission:

• could use a line in "plain english" about why people should be interested.
• who is your audience? will they be able to understand "exploiting directional multicast"?
• usually best to start with the "hook" from a marketing perspective and then explain a bit about the system after they're in
• I don't really understand the diagram here but could use some clarity

Design:

• diagram should be your actual product, not the generic techy art

Accolades

• bit confusing wording here. from the reader's perspective, this is the first time we found out about the origins as a student project
• maybe a quick intro line about how LEAP began as your capstone project would help here
• not sure about including the monetary value of the award. It is a cool flex for sure
• "SCE" acronym not obvious, spell it out the first time
• you won an award for the promotional video, why is it not on this site?

Team

• you could have a little bio here to humanize the team
• not familiar with the term "embedded" as an area of expertise but I'll defer to you on this one
• half the team has linkedin profiles, other has github - maybe keep consistency here? not a big deal bottom links
• very hidden, no one will notice these
• move the promo video front and center, it's very cool and explains things well. definitely needs to be embedded in your page and visible the moment you land on the site
• link the Cowie award in the Accolades section
• Terms of Service links back to main page

The issue concerns the LEAP Systems landing page, but it names no files, tests, or specific entry points. Start by locating the page sections for the mission, diagram, accolades, team, links, and promotional video; done means the requested content, links, layout, and presentation changes are reflected consistently across the site.