AppFlowy-IO / AppFlowy-IO/AppFlowy-Docs

Tense, Article, and Sentence Structure Errors

Open
#245 0 comments 0 reactions 0 assignees View on GitHub
Dominant language
No language data
Stars
109
Forks
108
PR merge metrics
No merged PRs in 30d

Description

https://github.com/AppFlowy-IO/AppFlowy-Docs/blob/cb1d8a02d240749c85bb75e37c96b9903393f235/essential-documentation/contribute-to-appflowy/write-for-appflowy/drafts/draft-how-to-add-a-new-property-to-appflowy-database.md?plain=1#L85

### **Identified Errors with Corrections:**

1. **Awkward phrasing / tense mismatch:**

* **Inaccurate:**
*"on adding CreatedAt and UpdatedAt property type has got merged."*
* **Accurate:**
*"`about` adding `the` `CreatedAt` and `UpdatedAt` property `types`, `which has just been` merged."*
*(Also pluralize “type” to “types”)*

2. **Missing punctuation / clarity:**

* **Inaccurate:**
*"So when you are reading this Appflowy has these two types as a property type."*
* **Accurate:**
*"So when you are reading this`, AppFlowy` `already` has these two types as property types."*

3. **Unclear subject in compound sentence:**

* **Inaccurate:**
*"I won't go through detail every specifics..."*
* **Accurate:**
*"I won’t go `into` detail `on` every specific..."*
*(Correct “go through” → “go into”; “detail” is uncountable; “specifics” → “specific” for clarity.)*

4. **Article Usage & Style:**

* **Inaccurate:**
*"but I will elaborate the parts which I think are essential."*
* **Accurate:**
*"but I will elaborate `on` the parts `that` I think are essential."*

Contributor guide

No contributing guide indexed for this repository

Assessment

This issue has not been assessed yet.

Get new issues in your inbox

A short digest of beginner-friendly GitHub issues.